In this blog post I'm going to be vlogging my answers to 7 questions about revising my narrative project. Some materials I looked over before making this post are What is Fan Fiction -- and why is it making people nervous? (Stephen Downes), and Rewinding and Rewriting: The Alternate Universes in Our Head (Hidden Brain Podcast). Here is also a link to my Narrative project web page
YouTube video vlog answers Here are the seven questions I'm answering In the vlog. 1) How did revising this draft impact the way you critiqued the product? Did the process lead to a closer reading? 2) When you revised the story's point-of-view, tense, and choice, did you make other revisions that weren't required? 3) How did rewriting the story in third person impact your interpretation of the real-life event? 4) How did rewriting the story in present tense impact your interpretation of the real-life event? 5) How did rewriting the decision impact your interpretation of the real-life event? 6) How did it feel to revise this story "during, after, and since." 7) For draft #3, will you return to the original story or continue with the counterfactual story? Why?
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In the blog post section I I'm going to be making a found poem in the sub genre free-form excerpting and remixing. The work I'm making this found poem out of is my narrative project draft 1. My goal for this found poem is for it to be at least 100 words and to follow the same storyline as my narrative project. In the section II of this blog post I'm going to be answering some questions related to my narrative project and this found poem.
Section I found poem I don't have the patience An option, a small window and lack of light to breath to call, to tell, to keep that promise ding, ding, ding my heart beats excruciating, don't get too concerned there was nothing there were options what options to wait, to shift, to pressure on your lungs beware no I’ll have it, I'll do it, the surgery I don't have the patience I should have waited I should have the patience waiting was overwhelming the feeling of blood this feeling some patients have how was I supposed to concentrate work, school, boss, advisor I should have waited. I should have waited till the summer. Section II Do you think the narrative provides enough descriptive language to create a compelling found poem? Yes I feel that my narrative project had enough description language to create a found poem but more description would not have hurt. Do you think the descriptive language more so creates a setting or delivers the subtext of a theme? I think for the first scene in my narrative project the descriptive language delivered more of a theme but in the second scene of my narrative project the descriptive language created more of a setting In revision, will you focus on using description to develop more of the setting or more of a theme? In revising I'll probably focus on using description to develop more of the setting |
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